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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

Such a great idea to do this - it works because there is a true connection on both a personal and a literary level - it’s not about random collaboration for superficial effect but a deeper interweaving of forms. If there are equally genuine ways to do this for any of the other poems, please do!

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Thanks Philip - yes, it feels very special to me., glad it communicated to you as well

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

Is the Dave who arranged & played this the same trumpet player you loved when you first saw him dancing to The Stones? If so, that’s the most hauntingly beautiful soundtrack to your poem about the random arc of love across the years. And it’s exquisite.

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Hi Deb - he most certainly is :)

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

What a wonderful treat this is! x

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Thanks Kymm

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

Wowsers!

Beautiful poem and the music adds to it making it so much more than just the sum of the parts.

What a treasure you have created together.

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Thankyou so much for listening :)

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

This is so fabulous xx

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Thanks Ann x

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

Just love this. What a beautiful collaboration.

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Thank you Clare!

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Apr 24Liked by Kim Moore and Clare Shaw

This is so beautiful, Kimster. Remind me, I want to talk to you about an idea it’s sprung! Xxxx

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sounds exciting!

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This is beautiful. The revolving trumpet sounds, the sadness of the scales, the bluesey feel, but also the energy and the motion, the opening and closing as the breath runs through the piece. Love how the solo trumpet comes in when he himself appears in the poem ; ) Playfully playing but soulful too. And kind of perfectly not a big deal... little sounding revolvings. It allows the images to lie on the surface like beautifully clearly defined lilos on a lake of sound!

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This is so beautiful—thank you for sharing it!

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Loved it! ❤️

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